With students eager to learn because they have eliminated outside factors as much as possible, graduation rates and success rates will soar into the sky! Maybe even raise in the world education ranking from bottom to top. More graduates will attend college and help create a world where schools get more funding for doing the right thing. This will also in turn with drug and alcohol abuse, child abuse, crime, and suicide rates. We should all come together and volunteer or at the very least donate five dollars a month to a school our children attend to or a school we care about. Think about it, buying one less pack of cigarettes or one less beer at the bar a month times one thousand people equals a ton of money that will help America as a whole.
So I fixed this post since it was a double of everyday use. This is an excerpt from my argumentative essay.
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Your colors were used well. The visuals were effective just make sure you add in more. You definitely had interesting topics. I enjoyed reading your writing. I did not see any grammar errors, so just add in those visuals and your will be good. Nice Job.
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